Saying of the day750字作文
Saying of the day:
Happy winter vacation started. my parents took me to a coldest city —— Harbin, a place of where the water freezes. On January 20, we started our journey.
Just got off the plane face a cold chill cold we shivering the strong cold air that I played a lot of sneezing, so we hurried to the door of the airport "hug" such as the warm air conditioning not easy into the hotel waves of warm wind, blowing we very comfortable to the designated room I will pounce on soft big bed and mom bring out the things we want to use.I saw the penguins in the tourism, the snowman and saw the water into ice.
Make our family are very happy this trip to ough that plane ticket is useless now but I will still be a good collection.
修改后:
Winter vacation has begun. My parents decided to take me to one of the coldest city-Harbin. On January 20th, we started our journey.
Just when we got off the plane, we felt the chill wind blowing toward us and we shivered in the cold air. Then we hurried to the warm air conditioning car. After we arrived at the hotel, I lay on big soft bed and my mom brought out the things we would use.I looked out of the window, and I saw snow everywhere. We made a snowman and went skiing there. We had a great time.
修改老师:Crystal 老师
初一:若子瑄
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