My Last Weekend250字作文
Hi,every one ,my name is Vivian Chinese name is Sun Jingyi. Last weekend was Saturday moring ,I did my homework and slept noon,I watched TV,it'very funny the afternoon ,Iwent to the Zhong Shan Park.It's so great!
Ilike my last weekend.
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Hi, every one, my name is Vivian. My Chinese name is Sun Jingyi. Last weekend I was happy. On Saturday moring, I did my homework and went sleeping. At noon, I watched TV which was very funny. In the afternoon, I went to the Zhong Shan Park and I had a great time there.
I like my weekend.
修改老师:Crystal 老师
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