SPRING700字作文

in the spring,we can flying ng a very beautiful.I Believe everyone love spring. in the spring ,i heve a picnic in the park look some ducks in the pond,they are lovely,sky not have a clouds. so todayout of the question rain soon. I heard the weather forecast ‘’it will be sunny in shandong'' are in the park the sun is shining and the wind is blowing ,linda and i are playing hinde and birds are rabbits are weather is very good.a man is wearing a big clildren are jumping in the water. we are having a lovely time！Bye-bye.

修改后：
Sring is very beautiful. I believe everyone loves spring. In spring, we can fly kites. In spring, we can have a picnic in the park. There, we can see some lovely ducks playing in the sun is shining brightly, the wind is blowing gently and the birds are singing happily. Linda and I are playing hide and seek. The weather is very good. We are having a great time.

修改老师：Crystal老师

六年级:管晓宇