英语如何写出中考高分作文(下)
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阅读电视广告词:“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示:
1.生活离不开水。
2.可饮用水在减少。
3.水污染严重。
4.应保护水源,再利用水。
A. [思路点拨]:
①文体:记叙文。
②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。
③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of y day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the times they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook dangerous it ily,great changes have taken place ists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the these changes make us very happy.
B. [思路点拨]:
①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。
②时态:一般现在时态。
③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。
Water is very important to can’t live without water we can drink is some people don’t seem to care about waste a lot of pour dirty water into rivers and r pollution is getting more and more we must do something to stop the not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
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