2017年高考全国2卷英语作文范文及赏析一

2017年高考全国2卷英语作文范文及赏析一
　　Dear Henry
　　I'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.
　　The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
　　I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.
　　Best wishes!
　　Yours,
　　Li Hua
　　1. 逻辑性较好，层次分明，连贯恰当；
　　2. 运用词块、句型丰富；
　　3. 个别用词需要改进比如说leader, leave a wonderful impression不符英语表达习惯；
　　4. 第一段不够简洁。